song writing/poetry

HITZtexasfan HITZtexasfan 2010-09-05 22:08:20 -0500

its sort of a poem because i dont know how to write songs but im trying to make it a song (if that makes sense). this is all i have so far...its a work in progress, id like to get opinions on it. maybe what i could change, what doesnt make sense.

 

I was sittin' on the sidewalk

Makin' a little small talk.....and you walked by

You lit up the gray October sky,

I knew I caught your ey and in that moment I knew...

 

It was like the moment when the sun touches the ocean,

Flowers blooming on the first day of spring

It was like a 17 yr olds romance, more then a summer fling.

It was beautiful because it was you, beautiful because I knew I was meant for you.

 

No words were ever spoken 

No ice needed to be broken

 your smile lit up my soul, was touched