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song writing/poetry
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2010-09-05 22:08:20 -0500 |
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its sort of a poem because i dont know how to write songs but im trying to make it a song (if that makes sense). this is all i have so far...its a work in progress, id like to get opinions on it. maybe what i could change, what doesnt make sense.
I was sittin' on the sidewalk Makin' a little small talk.....and you walked by You lit up the gray October sky, I knew I caught your ey and in that moment I knew...
It was like the moment when the sun touches the ocean, Flowers blooming on the first day of spring It was like a 17 yr olds romance, more then a summer fling. It was beautiful because it was you, beautiful because I knew I was meant for you.
No words were ever spoken No ice needed to be broken your smile lit up my soul, was touched
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